I've finally finished revising draft one of my LTP, and have sent it off to my supervisory committee! For their ease of use (as well as everyone else's), here's a masterlist with links to each of the sections. I've also included comments about how the original posts have been revised thus far. Making revision visible but not overwhelming for readers has thus far proved an interesting challenge, so if you can think of a more interesting way to capture this process, please feel free to let me know! I'm pretty much going by trial and error so far.
LTP Draft One Links